Interesting read, but flawed

I like the idea, and the mechanics of this "book".
But like others I just got bored by the random unlinked thoughts that went nowhere. I do like to think a bit, and tried to nut out the story, but the writers are trying too hard to be flashy at expense of what looks to be a solid story.
This kind of format would really suit a book of poems, or short stories. As a novel its just a fukd mess of ideas and strobe lights.

TiboriusMax about PRY